sticks and stones and hurtful words

your words
just words
like a dagger
its sharp point
tearing the skin
splintering bones
its jagged edges
piercing my heart
as blood spills
deep pain overwhelms
and crushes my spirit
sadness invades my soul
and I feel its mournful tears
knowing a part of me has died
just words
your words

*** Inspired by a poem posted by OM at ***

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25 Responses to sticks and stones and hurtful words

  1. Very nice Bill, tweeted this hope you don’t mind.

  2. Reblogged this on HarsH ReaLiTy and commented:
    Thoughts fluttering in the night. Like two ships passing, but still I wave. -OM

  3. Dil Se says:

    Very well written!

  4. undermyquilt says:

    Like this, well written and put across well πŸ™‚

  5. vicbriggs says:

    I love its sacadated pace. Speaks volumes. Just words. Your words.

  6. cmsrrn says:

    Reblogged this on Live. Love. Learn. Laugh. and commented:
    Your words are just words…

  7. yohwtf says:

    As I lost myself in this poem, I could not help but notice that they text appeared in the form of an arrowhead – fitting for such a sharp commentary!

  8. simplyilka says:

    Very Nice! I surely can relate!

  9. neetsgold says:

    Cool post – I always admire people who can write poetry…I suck at it! Thanks for visiting Sisterhood Sticky Notes – always awesome to get visitors from around the world. Good luck with your blogging project – keep going!

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